It was a Halloween feast at Hogwarts School, Hermione went to the toilet by herself when Professor Quirrel came sprinting in saying “Troll in the dungeons!”… “Ought you need to know!”. The grey, lumpy gluey, twelve feet tall troll stomped into the girl’s bathroom! Hermione saw the troll from the toilet smashing everything crazily. Hermione felt shocked and frightened. The troll tried to grab Hermione, but Hermione locked herself in the toilet. The troll used its club to smash the toilet. At this moment her two best friends, Ron and Harry Potter came in to rescue her. Harry Potter jumped on to the troll and asked Ron to help. Harry’s wand was up the giant troll’s nose, Ron took his wand and did a spell. The club went in the air and fell on the owner’s head. Finally the troll hit and fainted. Mr Dumbledore came in and said “what on earth are you doing?” “You could have been killed!” Hermione explained the situation and claimed that it was all her fault to save the boys from a punishment.
Well done Rachel a lovely piece of work with extended sentences. Next time you could also try to add some more of the sentence openers we've been practising in class.
Everybody had a Halloween feast. Professor Quirrel came in the hall sprinting and saying, "Trol in the dangens!" Suddenly Hermione started screaming in the toilet, because the trol was smashing the walls, "Boom! Bang!"
Everybody had a Halloween feast. Then professor Querl came sprinting in the hall and saying: "Troll is in the dangeon!" Suddenly Hermione started screaming, because the troll was smashing everything in the toilet, "Boom! Bang!" THE END
everyones doing so well with their homework now it s my turn
POPPY *********
One Halloween morning Proffessor Quirrel came panting in to the great hall "troll ... in the dungeon" he gasped " thought you ought to know" then he collapsed onto the floor head first creating a big purple bruse.
"Ive just thought about Hermione, she dosen,'t know about the troll Ron bit his lip. He had upset Hermione earlier that day and was starting to feel a bit guilty."Oh, all right then" he said "but we better not be seen"
They had just turned a corner when they heared something that made their hearts stop it was a low grunting sound coming from the toilets. "Hermione!" they screamed.
Hermione was fearfully stepping back towards the wall and suddenly felt a shimmer of lightning go down her back. She gulped and turned her head so she was looking directly at Harry and Ron "what are you doing here" she said a little shocked "saving you but no time for questions we need to defeat this troll" "Ahhhhh, right there's a little problem with that, he has a weapon we don't" "we have our wands" he said sarcasticly. Ron said the quickest spell that came into his head " wingardiam leviosa" the trolls club suddenly disappeared. "Now it'll be easier" Harry exclaimed. Harry jumped on to his back and the troll suddenly started shaking?!?! Oh no his wand had gone up the trolls mouldy nostril how was he gonna win now the troll sank to the floor groaning with pain like the titanic sank into the water.
It was Halloween party in the school.Hermione went to the toilet.Then the troll went to the girl's toilet.Hermione saw the big ,nasty ,green troll when she was coming out from the toilet and she was scared.She locked herself inside.Then the troll smashed the toilet.Harry and Ron came to help Hermione.At the end they defeated the troll.
Hermione has just spotted the mountain troll.He had dull granite,grey skin and a lumpy body like a boulder.His head was pearched on top like a coconut. The troll held a huge wooden club,which dragged on the floor as he walked.She was astonished when the troll apeared before her.The gloomy figure of of the troll started moving He was 12 feet tall.the lights were beigening to flicker in the hall.She was really shocked.She stared at it like somthing exploded. And then somthing happened.....
A Halloween feast began in the great hall at Hogwarts School. Just then Professor Quirrel came running into the great hall shouting, "troll in the dungeons!”. Everyone was silent then they screamed. Harry told Ron that he did not know where Hermione was, "she doesn't know about the troll" whispered Harry. "Do we have to?" said Ron. "Yes" said Harry. "But we can't let anyone know". "Alright”. Hermione went to the bathroom crying until she looked up and saw the mountain troll. Hermione screamed in horror! Harry and Ron heard a scream. When they went into the Girls bathroom they looked petrified. So they were hitting the troll with the wood that came from the doors. The troll picked Harry up. Ron did a spell for the troll’s club and then Harry put his wand in the troll’s nose. After he took it out and the troll fainted. “Go back to your rooms.” Professor Dumbledore said. THE END
One day, Hogwarts had a Halloween feast. Professor Quirrel came sprinting in the Great Hall saying, “Troll in the dungeons”. He shouted. “Ought you need to know.” BUUUSSHHH!!! Everyone gasped and fled out of the hall in fear. Everyone ran out of the school except Hermione. In worry she went to the girls toilets instead of outside to the safe grounds! She locked herself in the cubical when the troll came storming into the girl’s toilets. The troll tried to snatch her but she ducks under to the next cubical. Worried, Harry and Ron come trying to find her along with Dumbledore, who went another way.
Harry jumped pounced onto the troll and got his wand stuck up the troll’s disgusting, slimy and rotten nose. “ Ron, do a spell.” Harry screamed. “Which one?” asked Ron “Um …… WINGARDIUM LEVIOUSER” said Hermione Ron performed the spell and the club flew in the air and Ron accidently dropped his wand with greasy fingers form the feast. The club hits the trolls head and the trolls head, the troll faints with a big bang. Dumbledore comes running in and finds all three of them next to the troll. “What on earth are you doing here trying to defeat the troll. You could’ve died. Boys come with me for your punishment.” “No, they were saving me!”
It was a Halloween feast in Hogwarts School for witch craft and wizardry. Harry was helping himself to a jacket potato as Professor Quirrel came sprinting in to the great hall shouting “Troll in the dungeons...thought you ought to know” and the noise exploded in the great hall as everyone started talking. Then Professor Quirrel collapsed on the floor. Harry had just thought about Hermione, she was in the toilet all day as Ron had upset her earlier that day so he started feeling guilty. As Harry and Ron turned the corner a low grunting noise and a petrified scream had been heard. When they got to the bathroom they saw that the troll was knocking sinks of the wall, smashing toilets and doing all sorts of things. Harry’s wand was in one of the troll’s nostrils as he was clinging on to the troll’s neck for dear life. Ron pulled out his wand and did the first spell that came in his mind “Wingardiam Leviosa”. Suddenly, the club flew and banged the troll on his head then he fell flat on his face. Just then Professor Dumbledoor apeared and shouted “What were you doing, you’re lucky you weren’t killed. Go back to your rooms all of you”. From that moment on Hermione Granger was their friend.
It was Halloween. Harry and Ron were on their way to the Great hall. They were so hungry. They went inside the great hall and nestled themselves beside Neville Longbottom their fellow Gryffindor. While was Ron was stuffing himself to a kidney and steak pie. Their Defence of Dark arts teacher,Professor Quirrell came running in panting heavily and yelped," TROLL IN THE DUNGEONS" and collapsed. Everyone in the hall screamed like a herd of stampeding elephants. While at the staff table the teachers eyes as round as dinner plates while Snape (Harry's worst teacher) had small smirk. Harry pulled Ron's arm and tiptoed of to the girls bathroom as quietly as possible.Hermione Granger was there shivering to her bones. Harry and Ron screamed "Hermione!". The troll smashing toilets, knocking sinks and doing all sorts off things.Harry climbed on to the trolls greasy head. He clinged on to dear life. Ron was trying out his new spell he learnt in Charms. He did some complicated movement with his wand. Then collapsed on the floor.
Hermione on that picture went to the toilet during Halloween feast. She didn't know that Professor Quirinus Quirrell let the Troll into Hogwarts School. When she steped in, she realized that she's not alone. On the floor she saw two big' grey feet, then she looked up and saw the troll with big, dull, granite, grey skin. Then Troll attacked her when she was trying to go to the loo. Suddenly, Harry and Ron came sprinting into the toilet to help Hermione. Harry ran on to the Troll, and he put his wand into Troll's nose.
Hermione had spotted the troll. The troll has garnet, grey skin with a dirty white t-shirt that’s under a brown fest coat .He has pants like it is made of snake’s skin and his head is small like a coconut. He has a big stick that has lumps on. Hermione has a black jacket and she has curly hair that is brown and has bit of gold. The door is brown with a window in it. There is touches that dis not light all the room. There is a white wall that goes half the way. On the white wall there’s a black line like a third to the top and on the other half is a brown a little bit lighter than the doors one. Then Harry and Ron came. Then the battle began.
It was a Halloween feast at school and Hermione had locked herself in the toilet and Harry was just helping himself to a jacket potato when Professor Quirrel came sprinting down the Great hall gasping,“Troll in the dungeons!” “Thought you ought to know,” and then he sank to the floor and a noise exploded in the hall.
Suddenly Harry grabbed Ron's arm and gulped “Hermione doesn't know about the troll.” Ron bit his lips and remembered how he upset Hermione the other day and snapped,“alright” “but we'd better not be seen.” Just as they had turned a corner they heard loud thumping footsteps coming from the hallway and saw the troll going to the girls toilets where Hermione was crying. Something suddenly made their hearts stop a high petrified scream,“Herminoe!” they said together.
The Troll was like hairy boulder with a head perched on the top like a big watermelon and had a strong wooden club in his hand dragged along the floor. There was Hermione standing right in front of the troll and looking around at what was smashed by 12 ft tall monster. The troll tried to grab her but she escaped and secured herself in the toilet. Just the second the troll was about to knock down the door, Harry and Ron ran into the girls toilet and started to hurl the damaged pieces towards the troll to distract him. Luckily Ron threw a broken tap at the troll which made the troll roar.
Then Harry jumped on the club as his wand went up the troll's nose and he was hanging there for life. Harry said to Ron,“ quickly do something.”Then Ron said a spell,“WINGARDEUM- LEVIOSA”Then Harry jumped off the club and the club flew in the air and smashed on the trolls head knocking him out.
Then Mr Dumbledore said “what on earth were you doing over here,” “you could have been killed,”“back to your rooms now.” Hermione explained the whole story to Mr Dumbledore to save Harry and Ron from the punishment when it was actually her fault.
In the dark, gloomy and misty hallway, Hermione had just come out of a girl’s toilet cubicle. She was in the bathroom all afternoon crying. Ron Weasly had upset her earlier in the day by calling her names and she had rushed into the toilet as fast as a racing car. As she came out, the troll looked down at her and wondered what this small gingery haired animal was.
At the same time Hermione also stared down at two fat, lumpy, dirty, disgusting, grey blobs that looked like feet but were huge to be human feet. Hermione slowly followed the legs up to the creature’s waist. She witnessed the dirtiest piece of cloth she had ever seen in her life covering the waist of the creature. She stared further up at his round, hard and gross belly and hairy chest which was covered with a brown ill-fitting type of jacket. Its large bald head was placed on top like a crystal ball on its perch.
Hermione shockingly realised that she was standing in front of a fully grown Mountain Troll and screamed in despair.
Suddenly a Halloween feast appeared on golden plates. But Ron had upset Hermione so she was in the toilet. Then Professor Quirrel came sprinting into the great hall “troll…in the dungeons! Thought you ought to know!”. Hermione was still there and someone had to save her! Harry and Ron went to the toilet to save Hermione. The troll used a club to get everything out of its way and Harry and Ron were just on time to save Hermione. Harry hanged on the trolls neck asked Ron to help. Ron pulled out his wand and did a spell “Wingardam Liviosa!” the club went floating off the trolls hand and fell on its owners head and the troll was knocked out. Professor Dumbledore told the boys off but Hermione said that it was her fault to save the boys from punishment. At that very moment Hermione Granger became their best friend.
Hogwart school was having a haloween night and hermoine was in the toilets when Professor Quirel came sprinting into the great hall and shouted "troll in the dungens!"Harry thought about Hermonie she didn't know about the troll . Harry grabbed Ron's arm and tought him about Hermonie so they ran to the girls toilets . By the time they were there the troll was there . And Hermonie heard the troll smashing things of the walls and Harry and Ron tried to defeat the toll . Ron took out his wand and cried the first spell that came into his head "Wingardam Leviosa!" By : Ruben Dias
At Hogwarts school there was a halloween feast going on in the great hall. Everyone was eating but Hermione. Hermione was in the girls toilets. Harry said to his best friend Ron Weasley, "Now thats what I call a halloween feast." Harry was helping himself to a jacket potato then professor Quirrel came sprinting into the hall shouting "Troll in the dungeons!" Harry grabbed Ron's arm "I just thought about Hermione, she doesn't know about the troll." They ran around the corner and they saw the troll coming out of the dungeon and walking towards the girl's toilets dragging his huge wooden club. Hermione was squeezing against the wall while the troll was trying to break in. Harry and Ron started throwing things to distract the troll. Ron threw a tap at the troll, he turned around and roared. Harry jumped on to the troll and held on while Hermione got out of the toilets. Harry was clinging on for dear life, Ron pulled out his wand and said the first spell he could think of. Then the club flew up and donked the troll on his head and got knocked out.
Hermione and the mountain troll **************************************
Hermione was just washing her hands, then she turned around and saw a massive troll as big as an elephant and his body looked as hard as stone. He was over 8 feet tall and had grey rubbery skin, was quite dirty and very smelly. Hermione ran and tried to hide under the sinks, but the troll had a great big wooden club and with one enormous swing of his strong arm, he smashed the row of sinks into pieces all around her. She screamed and ran into one of the cubicles as the fast as she could, but the heavy troll lumbered towards her. Hermione was crouching against the wall feeling petrified. Suddenly the troll raised his club and smashed through all of the cubicles at once.
Then Ron and Harry sprinted into the room, and started throwing rubble at the troll to distract it. The troll then turned around in frustration to face Harry and Ron and he was not happy. Then Ron shouted "Hey why don't you pick on someone else your own size?"
"Wingardium leviosa," he yelled as he waved his wand at the troll. To everyone's surprise, the troll's club flew up into the air, wobbled over the troll's head and hit him in the belly, making the troll tumble to the floor . But he was not ready to give up and he was now very angry. When the troll got up to his knees Harry knew he had to do something quick, so he jumped onto the troll's back gripping tightly onto his neck . As the troll stood up he tried to shake Harry off, but all Harry could do was to stick his wand into the troll's disgusting nose. This shocked the troll so much that he spun around and tripped over a piece of a broken sink. He fell down with a thundering crash which made the whole room shake. Hermione ran over to Harry and Ron and gave them a big hug and she became their friend.
The Mountain Troll! Hermione is washing her hands in the girl bathroom when she sees the mountain troll approaching. It is dragging a huge wooden club across the floor which was made of a dark fir tree stump. She is petrified even if she is the best student in her year. She shrikes back closer to the wall. She was horrified by the sight .The troll has dark boulder like skin that is extremely lumpy. It has a bald grey head like a huge pebble. As the troll approaches with huge bangs Hermione mutters, “This is the end!” -Chanakya
Hermione and the Mountain Troll
ReplyDeleteIt was a Halloween feast at Hogwarts School, Hermione went to the toilet by herself when Professor Quirrel came sprinting in saying “Troll in the dungeons!”… “Ought you need to know!”. The grey, lumpy gluey, twelve feet tall troll stomped into the girl’s bathroom! Hermione saw the troll from the toilet smashing everything crazily. Hermione felt shocked and frightened. The troll tried to grab Hermione, but Hermione locked herself in the toilet. The troll used its club to smash the toilet. At this moment her two best friends, Ron and Harry Potter came in to rescue her. Harry Potter jumped on to the troll and asked Ron to help. Harry’s wand was up the giant troll’s nose, Ron took his wand and did a spell. The club went in the air and fell on the owner’s head. Finally the troll hit and fainted. Mr Dumbledore came in and said “what on earth are you doing?” “You could have been killed!” Hermione explained the situation and claimed that it was all her fault to save the boys from a punishment.
The End
By Rachel
Rachel that's some very good work
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I love the detail
DeleteWell done Rachel a lovely piece of work with extended sentences. Next time you could also try to add some more of the sentence openers we've been practising in class.
ReplyDeleteEverybody had a Halloween feast. Professor Quirrel came in the hall
ReplyDeletesprinting and saying, "Trol in the dangens!" Suddenly Hermione started screaming in the toilet, because the trol was smashing the walls, "Boom!
Bang!"
THE END
Jacob
Everybody had a Halloween feast. Then professor Querl came sprinting in the hall and saying: "Troll is in the dangeon!" Suddenly Hermione started screaming, because the troll was smashing everything in the toilet, "Boom! Bang!"
ReplyDeleteTHE END
By Jacob
that's a good one
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Thank you Poppy.
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everyones doing so well with their homework now it s my turn
ReplyDeletePOPPY
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One Halloween morning Proffessor Quirrel came panting in to the great hall "troll ... in the dungeon" he gasped " thought you ought to know" then he collapsed onto the floor head first creating a big purple bruse.
"Ive just thought about Hermione, she dosen,'t know about the troll
Ron bit his lip. He had upset Hermione earlier that day and was starting to feel a bit guilty."Oh, all right then" he said "but we better not be seen"
They had just turned a corner when they heared something that made their hearts stop it was a low grunting sound coming from the toilets.
"Hermione!" they screamed.
Hermione was fearfully stepping back towards the wall and suddenly felt a shimmer of lightning go down her back. She gulped and turned her head so she was looking directly at Harry and Ron "what are you doing here" she said a little shocked "saving you but no time for questions we need to defeat this troll"
"Ahhhhh, right there's a little problem with that, he has a weapon we don't"
"we have our wands" he said sarcasticly.
Ron said the quickest spell that came into his head " wingardiam leviosa"
the trolls club suddenly disappeared.
"Now it'll be easier" Harry exclaimed.
Harry jumped on to his back and the troll suddenly started shaking?!?!
Oh no his wand had gone up the trolls mouldy nostril how was he gonna win now
the troll sank to the floor groaning with pain like the titanic sank into the water.
By Poppy
It was Halloween party in the school.Hermione went to the toilet.Then the troll went to the girl's toilet.Hermione saw the big ,nasty ,green troll when she was coming out from the toilet and she was scared.She locked herself inside.Then the troll smashed the toilet.Harry and Ron came to help Hermione.At the end they defeated the troll.
ReplyDeleteBy ETHAN....
It was a good story
DeleteJacob
Hermione has just spotted the mountain troll.He had dull granite,grey skin and a lumpy
ReplyDeletebody like a boulder.His head was pearched on top like a coconut. The troll held a huge
wooden club,which dragged on the floor as he walked.She was astonished when
the troll apeared before her.The gloomy figure of of the troll started moving
He was 12 feet tall.the lights were beigening to flicker in the hall.She was really
shocked.She stared at it like somthing exploded. And then somthing
happened.....
Zayd
A Halloween feast began in the great hall at Hogwarts School. Just then Professor Quirrel came running into the great hall shouting, "troll in the dungeons!”. Everyone was silent then they screamed.
ReplyDeleteHarry told Ron that he did not know where Hermione was, "she doesn't know about the troll" whispered Harry.
"Do we have to?" said Ron.
"Yes" said Harry.
"But we can't let anyone know".
"Alright”.
Hermione went to the bathroom crying until she looked up and saw the mountain troll. Hermione screamed in horror! Harry and Ron heard a scream. When they went into the Girls bathroom they looked petrified. So they were hitting the troll with the wood that came from the doors. The troll picked Harry up. Ron did a spell for the troll’s club and then Harry put his wand in the troll’s nose. After he took it out and the troll fainted.
“Go back to your rooms.” Professor Dumbledore said.
THE END
One day, Hogwarts had a Halloween feast. Professor Quirrel came sprinting in the Great Hall saying, “Troll in the dungeons”. He shouted. “Ought you need to know.” BUUUSSHHH!!! Everyone gasped and fled out of the hall in fear. Everyone ran out of the school except Hermione. In worry she went to the girls toilets instead of outside to the safe grounds! She locked herself in the cubical when the troll came storming into the girl’s toilets. The troll tried to snatch her but she ducks under to the next cubical. Worried, Harry and Ron come trying to find her along with Dumbledore, who went another way.
ReplyDeleteHarry jumped pounced onto the troll and got his wand stuck up the troll’s disgusting, slimy and rotten nose.
“ Ron, do a spell.” Harry screamed.
“Which one?” asked Ron
“Um …… WINGARDIUM LEVIOUSER” said Hermione
Ron performed the spell and the club flew in the air and Ron accidently dropped his wand with greasy fingers form the feast. The club hits the trolls head and the trolls head, the troll faints with a big bang. Dumbledore comes running in and finds all three of them next to the troll.
“What on earth are you doing here trying to defeat the troll. You could’ve died. Boys come with me for your punishment.”
“No, they were saving me!”
THE END
It was a Halloween feast in Hogwarts School for witch craft and wizardry. Harry was helping himself to a jacket potato as Professor Quirrel came sprinting in to the great hall shouting “Troll in the dungeons...thought you ought to know” and the noise exploded in the great hall as everyone started talking. Then Professor Quirrel collapsed on the floor. Harry had just thought about Hermione, she was in the toilet all day as Ron had upset her earlier that day so he started feeling guilty. As Harry and Ron turned the corner a low grunting noise and a petrified scream had been heard. When they got to the bathroom they saw that the troll was knocking sinks of the wall, smashing toilets and doing all sorts of things. Harry’s wand was in one of the troll’s nostrils as he was clinging on to the troll’s neck for dear life. Ron pulled out his wand and did the first spell that came in his mind “Wingardiam Leviosa”. Suddenly, the club flew and banged the troll on his head then he fell flat on his face. Just then Professor Dumbledoor apeared and shouted “What were you doing, you’re lucky you weren’t killed. Go back to your rooms all of you”. From that moment on Hermione Granger was their friend.
ReplyDeleteGood description Saanvi.
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It was Halloween. Harry and Ron were on their way to the Great hall. They were so hungry. They went inside the great hall and nestled themselves beside Neville Longbottom their fellow Gryffindor. While was Ron was stuffing himself to a kidney and steak pie. Their Defence of Dark arts teacher,Professor Quirrell came running in panting heavily and yelped," TROLL IN THE DUNGEONS" and collapsed. Everyone in the hall screamed like a herd of stampeding elephants. While at the staff table the teachers eyes as round as dinner plates while Snape (Harry's worst teacher) had small smirk. Harry pulled Ron's arm and tiptoed of to the girls bathroom as quietly as possible.Hermione Granger was there shivering to her bones. Harry and Ron screamed "Hermione!". The troll smashing toilets, knocking sinks and doing all sorts off things.Harry climbed on to the trolls greasy head. He clinged on to dear life. Ron was trying out his new spell he learnt in Charms. He did some complicated movement with his wand. Then collapsed on the floor.
ReplyDeleteHermione on that picture went to the toilet during Halloween feast. She didn't know that Professor Quirinus Quirrell let the Troll into Hogwarts School. When she steped in, she realized that she's not alone. On the floor she saw two big' grey feet, then she looked up and saw the troll with big, dull, granite, grey skin. Then Troll attacked her when she was trying to go to the loo. Suddenly, Harry and Ron came sprinting into the toilet to help Hermione. Harry ran on to the Troll, and he put his wand into Troll's nose.
ReplyDeleteBy Oli
Hermione had spotted the troll. The troll has garnet, grey skin with a dirty white t-shirt that’s under a brown fest coat .He has pants like it is made of snake’s skin and his head is small like a coconut. He has a big stick that has lumps on. Hermione has a black jacket and she has curly hair that is brown and has bit of gold. The door is brown with a window in it. There is touches that dis not light all the room. There is a white wall that goes half the way. On the white wall there’s a black line like a third to the top and on the other half is a brown a little bit lighter than the doors one. Then Harry and Ron came. Then the battle began.
ReplyDeleteIt was a Halloween feast at school and Hermione had locked herself in the toilet and Harry was just helping himself to a jacket potato when Professor Quirrel came sprinting down the Great hall gasping,“Troll in the dungeons!” “Thought you ought to know,” and then he sank to the floor and a noise exploded in the hall.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly Harry grabbed Ron's arm and gulped “Hermione doesn't know about the troll.” Ron bit his lips and remembered how he upset Hermione the other day and snapped,“alright” “but we'd better not be seen.” Just as they had turned a corner they heard loud thumping footsteps coming from the hallway and saw the troll going to the girls toilets where Hermione was crying. Something suddenly made their hearts stop a high petrified scream,“Herminoe!” they said together.
The Troll was like hairy boulder with a head perched on the top like a big watermelon and had a strong wooden club in his hand dragged along the floor. There was Hermione standing right in front of the troll and looking around at what was smashed by 12 ft tall monster. The troll tried to grab her but she escaped and secured herself in the toilet. Just the second the troll was about to knock down the door, Harry and Ron ran into the girls toilet and started to hurl the damaged pieces towards the troll to distract him. Luckily Ron threw a broken tap at the troll which made the troll roar.
Then Harry jumped on the club as his wand went up the troll's nose and he was hanging there for life. Harry said to Ron,“ quickly do something.”Then Ron said a spell,“WINGARDEUM- LEVIOSA”Then Harry jumped off the club and the club flew in the air and smashed on the trolls head knocking him out.
Then Mr Dumbledore said “what on earth were you doing over here,” “you could have been killed,”“back to your rooms now.” Hermione explained the whole story to Mr Dumbledore to save Harry and Ron from the punishment when it was actually her fault.
-Sid
In the dark, gloomy and misty hallway, Hermione had just come out of a girl’s toilet cubicle. She was in the bathroom all afternoon crying. Ron Weasly had upset her earlier in the day by calling her names and she had rushed into the toilet as fast as a racing car. As she came out, the troll looked down at her and wondered what this small gingery haired animal was.
ReplyDeleteAt the same time Hermione also stared down at two fat, lumpy, dirty, disgusting, grey blobs that looked like feet but were huge to be human feet. Hermione slowly followed the legs up to the creature’s waist. She witnessed the dirtiest piece of cloth she had ever seen in her life covering the waist of the creature. She stared further up at his round, hard and gross belly and hairy chest which was covered with a brown ill-fitting type of jacket. Its large bald head was placed on top like a crystal ball on its perch.
Hermione shockingly realised that she was standing in front of a fully grown Mountain Troll and screamed in despair.
- Om
Hermione and the Mountain Troll
ReplyDeleteSuddenly a Halloween feast appeared on golden plates. But Ron had upset Hermione so she was in the toilet. Then Professor Quirrel came sprinting into the great hall “troll…in the dungeons! Thought you ought to know!”. Hermione was still there and someone had to save her! Harry and Ron went to the toilet to save Hermione. The troll used a club to get everything out of its way and Harry and Ron were just on time to save Hermione. Harry hanged on the trolls neck asked Ron to help. Ron pulled out his wand and did a spell “Wingardam Liviosa!” the club went floating off the trolls hand and fell on its owners head and the troll was knocked out. Professor Dumbledore told the boys off but Hermione said that it was her fault to save the boys from punishment. At that very moment Hermione Granger became their best friend.
-Pritesh
Hogwart school was having a haloween night and hermoine was in the toilets when Professor Quirel came sprinting into the great hall and shouted "troll in the dungens!"Harry thought about Hermonie she didn't know about the troll . Harry grabbed Ron's arm and tought him about Hermonie so they ran to the girls toilets . By the time they were there the troll was there . And Hermonie heard the troll smashing things of the walls and Harry and Ron tried to defeat the toll . Ron took out his wand and cried the first spell that came into his head "Wingardam Leviosa!"
ReplyDeleteBy : Ruben Dias
At Hogwarts school there was a halloween feast going on in the great hall. Everyone was eating but Hermione. Hermione was in the girls toilets. Harry said to his best friend Ron Weasley, "Now thats what I call a halloween feast." Harry was helping himself to a jacket potato then professor Quirrel came sprinting into the hall shouting "Troll in the dungeons!" Harry grabbed Ron's arm "I just thought about Hermione, she doesn't know about the troll." They ran around the corner and they saw the troll coming out of the dungeon and walking towards the girl's toilets dragging his huge wooden club. Hermione was squeezing against the wall while the troll was trying to break in. Harry and Ron started throwing things to distract the troll. Ron threw a tap at the troll, he turned around and roared. Harry jumped on to the troll and held on while Hermione got out of the toilets. Harry was clinging on for dear life, Ron pulled out his wand and said the first spell he could think of. Then the club flew up and donked the troll on his head and got knocked out.
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Hermione was just washing her hands, then she turned around and saw a massive troll as big as an elephant and his body looked as hard as stone. He was over 8 feet tall and had grey rubbery skin, was quite dirty and very smelly. Hermione ran and tried to hide under the sinks, but the troll had a great big wooden club and with one enormous swing of his strong arm, he smashed the row of sinks into pieces all around her. She screamed and ran into one of the cubicles as the fast as she could, but the heavy troll lumbered towards her. Hermione was crouching against the wall feeling petrified. Suddenly the troll raised his club and smashed through all of the cubicles at once.
Then Ron and Harry sprinted into the room, and started throwing rubble at the troll to distract it. The troll then turned around in frustration to face Harry and Ron and he was not happy. Then Ron shouted "Hey why don't you pick on someone else your own size?"
"Wingardium leviosa," he yelled as he waved his wand at the troll. To everyone's surprise, the troll's club flew up into the air, wobbled over the troll's head and hit him in the belly, making the troll tumble to the floor . But he was not ready to give up and he was now very angry. When the troll got up to his knees Harry knew he had to do something quick, so he jumped onto the troll's back gripping tightly onto his neck . As the troll stood up he tried to shake Harry off, but all Harry could do was to stick his wand into the troll's disgusting nose. This shocked the troll so much that he spun around and tripped over a piece of a broken sink. He fell down with a thundering crash which made the whole room shake. Hermione ran over to Harry and Ron and gave them a big hug and she became their friend.
The Mountain Troll!
ReplyDeleteHermione is washing her hands in the girl bathroom when she sees the mountain troll approaching. It is dragging a huge wooden club across the floor which was made of a dark fir tree stump. She is petrified even if she is the best student in her year. She shrikes back closer to the wall. She was horrified by the sight .The troll has dark boulder like skin that is extremely lumpy. It has a bald grey head like a huge pebble. As the troll approaches with huge bangs Hermione mutters, “This is the end!”
-Chanakya